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Im tired of feeling this way
I think Ill but an end to it today
Shut the door and let it go
Slit my wrist and let it flow
Suicide is the only solution i see
Fuck you all just let me be
You never will know me like you think
So get the hell away with stupid shit
I was never good anough for you
No matter what Id try or do
You wish i were dead and i agree
So go ahead and do it KILL ME!
I cant help but wonder how we got to this place
And if you knew i would be a suicide case
Why did we ever get involved
Now this will never be solved
I gave you everything with nothing in return
Now you damn me to hell to burn
You always put me down
Picked me up and threw me to the ground
I had to do all the work fo us
Though your convinced you did so Im fucked
You say I dont love you and dont try hard enough
And your convinced of this so again Im fucked
You say you did it al and I did nothing
Though I wanted to give you my all but when we'd meet we were barely touching...
I think Ill but an end to it today
Shut the door and let it go
Slit my wrist and let it flow
Suicide is the only solution i see
Fuck you all just let me be
You never will know me like you think
So get the hell away with stupid shit
I was never good anough for you
No matter what Id try or do
You wish i were dead and i agree
So go ahead and do it KILL ME!
I cant help but wonder how we got to this place
And if you knew i would be a suicide case
Why did we ever get involved
Now this will never be solved
I gave you everything with nothing in return
Now you damn me to hell to burn
You always put me down
Picked me up and threw me to the ground
I had to do all the work fo us
Though your convinced you did so Im fucked
You say I dont love you and dont try hard enough
And your convinced of this so again Im fucked
You say you did it al and I did nothing
Though I wanted to give you my all but when we'd meet we were barely touching...
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I wrote this after me and my ex boyfriend Tim broke up. It was a pretty nasty break up...we broke up on our anniversary...only once month...but i was like 13 at the time so it mattered to me..and i was all bleh so i wrote about it..it was true ad turned out well. Its self explanitory in my opinion, he leaves me convinced that i didnt do anything for him and i felt i did it all...so i was screwed over and yea, enjoy, relate, or just simply understand.
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i liked it. so direct. there is some triteness, but i always have that problem when i write a break up poem. but ah... i'm older and wiser now, lol. i enjoyed the honesty, and the fact that not a single line seemed forced. i mean, even with the rhymes matching up, it does seem natural.
good job.
good job.